We were learning about how to write a good sounding recount .my recount is about the time there was a massive earthquake. this is describing what we did and how we felt in this situation.
I found it easy to find decent backgrounds for my slides
I found it challenging to ad detailed stems that match my blog post
Next time I will Challenge myself and ad longer and more deatailed stems to my blog post
Kia Ora Ceejay my favorite part of the story would be when you put a exclamation mark when it said it almost made my TV fall off, I know how you feel. This brings me back to when the earthquake happened to my family and we were all still asleep. You might want to think about changing the colour for you text it is kind of hard to see.
ReplyDeletehi CJ I really liked how you wrote about the earthquake and how you woke up suddenly because I did the same thing but next time I think you should have more words to your paragraphs.
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