Wednesday, August 26, 2020

how to add a voice in scratch

we were 






environmental poem









the stream was fast but silent.

 stream was bubley.

Low tide.

Leafs crunching on the banks.

Trees swaying left and right.

Sound of gum boots splashing in the water.

Kids screaming with joy.

The smell of food.

Shimmering sun shining on the river.

Clear shiny stream.

Mageistic see through water.

Super slippery moss on the bottom of the stream.

Rocks super slippery on the bottom of the river.

Sound of the river moving.

Sound of kids playing in the water.

The feeling of water splashing on my face










We were learning about environmental poems about what were we had been with an amazing community and environment that cares for the earth
I found it easy to transfer my writing from my book to my chromebook and put it on my blog and post it.
I found it challenging to think of a quality poem that would be not to long or to short
Next time I will will add more rich words in my writing so it's not as boring

Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Friday, August 14, 2020



Wednesday, August 12, 2020





                         Wild lab

On & Tuesday I was getting ready for the amazing wild lab. So I shut my eyes and when I woke up. Im LATE FOR THE WILD LAB I yelled. Do I have everything I  will miss out on? The wild lab will get left behind. Then I look at the time it was four in the morning so I go back to sleep...  and When I woke up ITS SEVEN FORTY then I started to worry ‘im ‘LATE FOUR WILD LAB’ and then this is when it wanted to go back to sleep. But I did not go back to sleep. Instead I packed everything in my bag and left. Somehow I made it to school on time and got on the bus And left.

We were on the bus and all the others on the bus were sometimes singing, not that it wasn't good. It just went on for ages and it gave me a headache and no one likes a headache.

It was invertebrates time at the wild lab. It was around 11.35. So we And my invertebrate is called venomous. You can find it in the only the deepest rivers and the dirtiest rivers because it does not like to be seen. & lives for ten years in the water and 2 weeks out of it and die on christmas day and die before they get to 5o meters the longest they ever grow is 20 meters so it is still long so I wonder if a real animal looked like how I described it.

now It was time to go mountain climbing and we were A loud sticks and I made A great choice not to bring one. Wait no that was not a good idea. Anyway we went up the great amazing mountain of the wild lab and then we ran all the down.




                        
We were learning about writing long paragraphs. & publishing recounts
I found it easy to think of ideas for the writing that I put on the internet and the choise to the things that I do put on the internet.
i found it challenging to think of every individual idea on the paragraphs that are in my writing .
next time I will try think of more ideas for my writing to challenge my self when I do my writing.


                        

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