Wednesday, August 12, 2020



                         Wild lab

On & Tuesday I was getting ready for the amazing wild lab. So I shut my eyes and when I woke up. Im LATE FOR THE WILD LAB I yelled. Do I have everything I  will miss out on? The wild lab will get left behind. Then I look at the time it was four in the morning so I go back to sleep...  and When I woke up ITS SEVEN FORTY then I started to worry ‘im ‘LATE FOUR WILD LAB’ and then this is when it wanted to go back to sleep. But I did not go back to sleep. Instead I packed everything in my bag and left. Somehow I made it to school on time and got on the bus And left.

We were on the bus and all the others on the bus were sometimes singing, not that it wasn't good. It just went on for ages and it gave me a headache and no one likes a headache.

It was invertebrates time at the wild lab. It was around 11.35. So we And my invertebrate is called venomous. You can find it in the only the deepest rivers and the dirtiest rivers because it does not like to be seen. & lives for ten years in the water and 2 weeks out of it and die on christmas day and die before they get to 5o meters the longest they ever grow is 20 meters so it is still long so I wonder if a real animal looked like how I described it.

now It was time to go mountain climbing and we were A loud sticks and I made A great choice not to bring one. Wait no that was not a good idea. Anyway we went up the great amazing mountain of the wild lab and then we ran all the down.




                        
We were learning about writing long paragraphs. & publishing recounts
I found it easy to think of ideas for the writing that I put on the internet and the choise to the things that I do put on the internet.
i found it challenging to think of every individual idea on the paragraphs that are in my writing .
next time I will try think of more ideas for my writing to challenge my self when I do my writing.


                        

1 comment:

  1. Your writing tells me 'the reader' that you were very excited to go to the Wild Lab. You have chosen your adjectives to create a picture in the readers mind e.g. 'deepest rivers - dirtiest rivers'. Have you checked your capital letters to begin a sentence?

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