what did you learn I learnt how to write a better poem
What I enjoy I enjoyed writing a poem to be continued
What was challenging?
What was easy?
What I will do next time
The stream was fast but silent.
The stream was bubley.
Low tide.
Leafs crunching on the banks.
Trees swaying left and right.
Sound of gum boots splashing in the water.
Kids screaming with joy.
The smell of food.
Shimmering sun shining on the river.
Clear shiny stream.
Mageistic see through water.
Super slippery moss on the bottom of the stream.
Rocks super slippery on the bottom of the river.
Sound of the river moving.
Sound of kids playing in the water.
The feeling of water splashing on my face.
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